LainTime/Bazingaa^_- Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 Here is the pic. Im not super-proud about it. Feels like something is missing or its too much or something.. i don't know. Maybe you guys can figure out what it is about the pic.. Need help with this one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wizbang Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 How bout some spent casings strewn about the empty area. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LainTime/Bazingaa^_- Posted February 21, 2012 Author Share Posted February 21, 2012 How bout some spent casings strewn about the empty area. Yeah ill try to make something like that to fill out the empty area. Thanks for the idea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
icky?/ Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 It needs nudity. Can't go wrong with that, 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chuckun Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 The background is great, love the steel bolts. The problem is the font and fill style used for F|A.. Get rid of the hazardous tape, use something else.. And I agree used cases would be a good idea.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LainTime/Bazingaa^_- Posted February 21, 2012 Author Share Posted February 21, 2012 The background is great, love the steel bolts. The problem is the font and fill style used for F|A.. Get rid of the hazardous tape, use something else.. And I agree used cases would be a good idea.. What do you think about using the font Dax Compact Black in a dark red color? I got the inspiration from Chernobyl, Pripyat, old Soviet Union and the game S.T.A.L.K.E.R. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chuckun Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 What do you think about using the font Dax Compact Black in a dark red color? I got the inspiration from Chernobyl, Pripyat, old Soviet Union and the game S.T.A.L.K.E.R. Yeah I think that could work.. The capitals of F and A in large size Dax Compact Black do look simplistic but good.. Give it a try! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wifestein Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 Too many effects lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ajnl Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 Too many effects lol There are never too many effects Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wifestein Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 There are never too many effects There are, trust me =P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ajnl Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 There are, trust me =P LIES and slander! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LainTime/Bazingaa^_- Posted February 22, 2012 Author Share Posted February 22, 2012 What you think about this one? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackTiger Posted February 22, 2012 Share Posted February 22, 2012 Not bad man..not bad. To cut out the "empty space" i would just move F|A to the middle, maybe stretch a bit and cut out the upper/lower a bit. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LainTime/Bazingaa^_- Posted February 22, 2012 Author Share Posted February 22, 2012 Not bad man..not bad. To cut out the "empty space" i would just move F|A to the middle, maybe stretch a bit and cut out the upper/lower a bit. What about this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chuckun Posted February 22, 2012 Share Posted February 22, 2012 What about this? If you really want constructive criticism here's some - have you not noticed the bullets look... odd? Wanna know why they look odd? The shadowing is coming from all different angles.. Some of the bullets are shadowed on the left, some are shadowed on the right.. Invert some of them them so all the shadowing is on the right of each bullet to match the shadowing on the bolts and it'll look better Chuck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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