Chameleon Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 This is my first shot at this tell me what ya think.. Be honest I wanna get it as good as possible.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbonzakura Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 Depends on what do you want to achieve. The text is unreadable, too flat in the middle... and to be quite honest... what does this banner say, i mean it has nothing to do with anything? S. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kapone Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 I think you should try positioning the moving object more downwards, and put your name above it instead. Currently it's hard to read the text. I do however like the graphic and colours. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chameleon Posted May 25, 2013 Author Share Posted May 25, 2013 Depends on what do you want to achieve. The text is unreadable, too flat in the middle... and to be quite honest... what does this banner say, i mean it has nothing to do with anything? S. The background is a phoenix, the text says =F|A=Ph0enix.. I agree the text is to flat in the middle for real.. I was trying to achieve much more than getting it done if that makes sense hehe.. I wanted to be able to make one, get you guys to tell me where things could improve and begin to get better from there haha Thanks for your feedback! I think you should try positioning the moving object more downwards, and put your name above it instead. Currently it's hard to read the text. I do however like the graphic and colours. Yeah I agree, shoulda had the name at the top for sure and need to make the text much more clear.. Thanks man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenoDeki Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 The background is a phoenix, the text says =F|A=Ph0enix.. I agree the text is to flat in the middle for real.. I was trying to achieve much more than getting it done if that makes sense hehe.. I wanted to be able to make one, get you guys to tell me where things could improve and begin to get better from there haha Thanks for your feedback! Yeah I agree, shoulda had the name at the top for sure and need to make the text much more clear.. Thanks man I didn't know the background was a phoenix lol. It looks nice btw just need to fix the text xD 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chameleon Posted May 25, 2013 Author Share Posted May 25, 2013 Hahaha thanks XenoDeki Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chameleon Posted May 25, 2013 Author Share Posted May 25, 2013 Okay my next try at it Any better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slenderman Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 Replace the O in your name with that spinning thingy, that would look hawt. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chameleon Posted May 25, 2013 Author Share Posted May 25, 2013 Replace the O in your name with that spinning thingy, that would look hawt. Very good idea my friend! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chameleon Posted May 25, 2013 Author Share Posted May 25, 2013 My third attempt.. I took Slender's advice and used the spinning thing as the O in my name.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zoe Fletcher Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 Looking good !!!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ol Smoke Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 Gee Whiz man...that thing is sucking the bandwidth out of my internet connection. It took me thirty minutes just to type this. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RunAway Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 Looks awesome Phoenix, i like it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chameleon Posted May 26, 2013 Author Share Posted May 26, 2013 Looks awesome Phoenix, i like it Thank you!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eggtato Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 That is looking good now. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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