Feedback pleases?

[Lumen]

Just re wrote it with the feedback from last one, completly redone, hope you like and don't forget feedback!:wink:

 

 

In case you don't live in the U.S and don't know who Benjamin Franklin was he was a man who lived in the 18th century meaning the 1700's. He was a founding father of the United States and lived in Paris, France for a while. He was also a stone mason and an inventor.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorrry mac wont let me copy and paste ill post when I get home, its on sandwiches :wink:

[JoeDirt]

Please use the original thread you started, don't create double threads for the same thing.