g.o.a.t. Posted June 24, 2009 Share Posted June 24, 2009 Poetry is what we believe, and what we believe is poetry. Get it. *Snapping fingers* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metal_scum Posted June 24, 2009 Share Posted June 24, 2009 ok now i got stuck and everyone thinks i suck but just believe me already i was heading towards her steady started kissing her with haste but she just slapped me in the face so if you tell her i am a newb ill slap you face with tube :D :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErikFox :) Posted June 24, 2009 Author Share Posted June 24, 2009 that was good metal... ._. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metal_scum Posted June 24, 2009 Share Posted June 24, 2009 you really think so? was my poem good? if its good i wanna know because it'll make my mood poetry is just not for me keep walking skull... yours rocked Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BloodyGustaf Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 well ....you're gettin there metal but keep workin on them (the last 2 big ones I submitted I found, but this one I made up by myself) GUYS CHECK OUT MINE! ~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ =#=The Testimony of Fems' BF=#= I thrust while she squeezed, and she trust I was pleased So I got off for a drink, said I'd be back with a wink Wetting my throat with the goose, I came back for round deuse Yet to my surprise she had a whip, it sat so menacingly at her hip Oh I coward in fear, fore she smelled of cheap beer From then on I was her b***, and like a horse...I got the switch *whip cracking sound* ~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metal_scum Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 OK im sorry if i messed this topic but ill post some poems more when i feel bored nice one dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metal_scum Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 i love you with all my heart but i hate it when you fart youre just a crazy old goat that cant fit on a big boat so please go f*** yourself and pretend you are an elf you didnt come to my bedroom but you said i suck but please just let me inform you that it was the door that got you stuck rate it please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErikFox :) Posted June 25, 2009 Author Share Posted June 25, 2009 um... 3 outta 10? lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thundercunt Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 i love you with all my heartbut i hate it when you fart youre just a crazy old goat that cant fit on a big boat so please go f*** yourself and pretend you are an elf you didnt come to my bedroom but you said i suck but please just let me inform you that it was the door that got you stuck rate it please 10/10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErikFox :) Posted June 27, 2009 Author Share Posted June 27, 2009 thunder... really? lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PHANTASM Posted June 27, 2009 Share Posted June 27, 2009 ouch. William Butler Yeats is crying somewhere in the afterlife. These are the worst poems I have ever seen. The one from Skull (post #2 I think) was funny, coming after that heartbreaking sentimental one at the start, but after that, man they were just awful. There once was a man from Nantucket... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metal_scum Posted June 27, 2009 Share Posted June 27, 2009 poetry is just not for me stated above... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErikFox :) Posted June 28, 2009 Author Share Posted June 28, 2009 Im sorry i posted this thread lol. If anyone can post a good poem like mine ^^ then i will let you kill me in ET 5 times in a row. i get a fail spree and you get a killing spree. anyone want to take that on? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BloodyGustaf Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 "If anyone can post a good poem like mine ^^" > excuse me. I took creative writing in school and yours didn't stand out as much as you'd like to think. :hmmm Poetry is a personal thing and quality is in the eye of the beholder. Don't be so quick to judge other peoples "crafted-in-2-minute-poems". Skull, Thunder, and I are expressing comedy through our small works and it's refreshing. Thus our poetry has accomplished it's objective Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metal_scum Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 nicely said Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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