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Its been a long time since I've written anything but here's two of them, they are written in the form of sonnets:

Dreamy Rendition

slouched shoulders
Weighed down by all of the injustices
crushed by boulders
they are no more then cleopatra's to your augustus'

its just fate
part of a greater vision
nine lives down to eight
due to indecision

learn from the past
and attack the present
move quick, adapt fast
dodge whats coming and not what just went

shed your pasts banshee
because progress lies in ambition
close your eyes and see where you want to be
search the answers to life's problems in your dreamy rendition

Generation Lost

as time goes on the realization hits
honesty ages like innocence

as the yearly trees will shed a leaf
the lies that lie on our tongues will eventually leave

for it is naturely nature whose course repeats
for a path is hard not to travel once they become streets

we look up to our elders for wisdom and guidance
but all you will find is subsidence

Like all those prior, none the wiser, merely more clever with their lip
When the hollow subsides don't lose your grip

One day you will let go from shear exhaust
Fall down the abyss and read the signs: Another Generation Lost

Edited by *Evil*Thuggin, 24 April 2011 - 07:27 PM.



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Wow! I LOVE THOSE!!! :o
VERY beautiful, thuggin :)

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Wow! I LOVE THOSE!!! :o
VERY beautiful, thuggin :)


Thanks :), I think my poems killed the thread though lol.

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Nah you didn't kill it. People are just shy :D

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i wrote back in high school for a girl that i knew died in a car wreck

It sounds so fun, driving around in the sun.
She was so innocent, young, and sweet.
She had the world right at her feet.
Who would have known that she would die,
leaving everyone she touched to grieve and to cry?
Into the car she got so fast,
She didn't know that today was her last.
It all came up to fast for sight,
But she didn't give up without a fight.
Her funeral was the saddest day of my entire life.
Reality cut through me like a knife.
In another place in another time,
Her life no longer a part of mine.

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:| That made me cry :/ my were all misty n stuff :(
But it's really, really, good

Edited by HannahG, 29 April 2011 - 01:17 PM.


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If you carry impatience in your heart then you are alive
If you carry dreams in your eyes then you are alive
Learn to live like the free waves of wind
Learn to flow like the sea does as waves
Receive every moment in life with open arms
Every moment is a new beginning seeing with your eyes
If you carry surprise in your eyes then you are alive
If you carry impatience in your heart then you are alive



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This isn't one I wrote, its actually the oldest written words (12th Century) in dutch found (somewhere on the back page in a bible, presumably penned by a monk) and I think it's beautiful that the oldest written words in my language are about love, so i just had to share it:

Old Dutch:

Hebban olla vogala nestas hagunnan hinase hic enda thu. Wat unbidan we nu

English:

Have all birds begun nests, except me and you. What are we waiting for.


Very short and for some perhaps very silly, but it still evokes great emotion in me everytime I read it, just makes me wanna feel in love and long for autumn.

PS: I write some poetry from time to time, but its in dutch, I'll try to translate some in the next days, but if I feel I can't keep the same feeling off the poems in another language, I'll drop it.

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A short "standup" poem

lets see how this ends up ...

Crooked minds, blood spilled
Bullets and guns
no peace, always war
no room for the "kind"
let's break loose and unwind
disagree to agree
create peace
change the present
to say the past
"never it never happened"
we have a chance to rewind
a new story
for the upcoming generation
clean and pure stories
parables, primary resources
no pain in our hearts
create a future
for those with no hope
everlasting happiness
long lasting memories
flowers and life
pencils and paper
sane minds, clean hands

-random much? i guess i thought about peace and love among us all.




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